Thinking about format

Breezing through the artwork suddenly. This means that I'm getting to the point where I've got to start thinking about the design of the project. The spread I'm posting here is awfully rough. I've got to to reconsider type, layout and even some additional spot illustrations. For instance, the last paragraph on today's post is screaming for an accompanying panel. Rethinking (Hell, let's be honest -- thinking) about the design is going to be a day or two's worth of work. I don't want to get behind turning out the pages in the meanwhile. So I think my plan is to keep pushing ahead with the story through this week, and then taking a day or two to re-design and represent what I've done. When I've finished, I'll post a PDF of the story so far. Any thoughts?